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The Cuts by ~xXKinkyXKitsuneXx:iconxXKinkyXKitsuneXx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Spoken Word


On the wrist
On the neck
or anywhere on my own
im not comiting sucide
im not even attempting
its just the pain
Pain
adding up
building up
forming inside me
the ache of this unfit heart
broken
given
smashed
freed
and the torture
cuts adding, mulitiplying even
to inflict physical pain
to release emotional pain
The blood dribbles off
flowing carelessly on my clothes
or in the air
or on the floor drying away
a stain
of my pain
it scars up
but the pain
inside of me
crawls around
never wanting to go away
some part of me begs it to leave
some part of me pleads it to stay
But the cuts...
...my cuts......
will stay with me
until the night falls
for me to take my final lay...
©2004-2010 ~xXKinkyXKitsuneXx
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My cuts scarred up...but my pain stays alive.

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~gothickitty Apr 23, 2004, 6:10:25 PM
Wow....do you really cut yourself?? Honestly, I've thought about it. But I can't bring myself to do it...tried with a safety pin and my shaving raxor blade...the pin didn't work, the razor just hurt and I didn't bleed...ugh. lol
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~Mandie-Angel Sep 12, 2006, 2:58:14 PM
:hug: beautiful..hope you feel better

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~broadcastromance Sep 13, 2006, 6:26:18 PM
what you said in that is exactly what i feel.. i also cut. not in an attempt of suicide, but just to release emotional pain... by feeling physical pain...
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~batzura Jan 22, 2007, 4:21:52 PM
hehehe, juz cut myself, and i saw this, d well :\, i feel exactly the same rite now *-*....hehe d well all my pain turned into a star on my deadly skin *-* i kinda luv it now *-* and well now i need to try hidem :\ xD...oh well really luve ur words *-*

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~nothingness494 Oct 13, 2007, 7:58:08 PM
it is like you read my mind

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~syko2k Dec 13, 2007, 4:42:56 PM
That's amazing. I also cut myself, but not in a suicide kind of way. I do it because I can't talk to anyone about what I'm going through. So I think thats' the only way.

Great job! Keep up the good work!
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~tohrugirl94 Dec 25, 2007, 6:29:01 PM
wow. thats a really good poem. i did cut myself but my friends were yelling at me so i stopped.

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My mind could possibly be your worst nightmare.
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~Joni-Eye Jan 10, 2008, 10:33:03 PM
I dont cut, but have been depressed, and you make it sound such a nearly spiritual thing..

This is a very good effort

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As one falls, they get closer to the rising again...
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=ViscountDevil Jan 19, 2008, 10:45:32 AM
That is exacally why i do it. To release the emotional pain. It makes me focus more on that pain more than the pain thats hurting me most.

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